Wow the last couple of lines hit really hard. We all make mistakes and some cost us more then others. Excellent poem 5/5 for sure

Oh i wish this did not have to happen to anyone.

it is so sad. but you wrote it so so well. perfect in fact.

i voted and gave you a 5. excellent. i'll read and comment and vote on some more.

david

Wow. You have some amazing talent! 5/5 from me. And I loved how you rhymed it! And how you put it together so well! Great Job!

Again another great poem, so much emotion put into your poems and even though they are sad they are great to read!
Keep up the good work i'll be reading a lot more of your poems :]
5/5

This is sad and full of emotion. I hope it is not inspired by your own real life events. Keep writing!

Cute poem.. sad but still a good write.. the only thing i didnt like was the ending.. it wasnt bad at all just a little cliche..

Wow that is really really good keep your work up. i hope its not about you though:(
5/5 as always

xx.chelsea.xx

ps. it might have been to your poem i totally forget which one it was. but it said " if you ever need someone to talk to you can go ahead and comment me and i can give you my e-mail " comment me back