by bethany Jan 10, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Why can't I forget him |
This was a great poem and u can tell its coming from the heart BUT it rhymes wayyyy to quickly....u have to add more in between the lines so it sounds a lil better....im only saying this 2 help u not 2 embarress u i promise:-) well ill give u 5/5 cuz i no u tried!!! |
Try adding on to it... this could turn out to be even more than awesome! |
by bethany
Hey thanks I try to |
by Bethany M
Good poem....i like it...but then again i always feel like that lately...5/5...read mine if you get a chance |