Good poem....i like it...but then again i always feel like that lately...5/5...read mine if you get a chance

Hey thanks I try to

Try adding on to it... this could turn out to be even more than awesome!

This was a great poem and u can tell its coming from the heart BUT it rhymes wayyyy to quickly....u have to add more in between the lines so it sounds a lil better....im only saying this 2 help u not 2 embarress u i promise:-) well ill give u 5/5 cuz i no u tried!!!