Comments : The Performance

  • 17 years ago

    by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere

    5/5. Great poem. Just amazing. I loved how you rhymed it and it was just very sweet and nice!

  • 17 years ago

    by DavidBrendan

    I love this poem, its really deep and the name echoes whats inside which is what it should do. I'm really into music and seeing some of my feelings into words is really awesome. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    This is very aweet. Nicely penned with good imagery. I like it!

  • 17 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    I love the sound of a piano it's probably one of the best, and I love this poem also. The rhyming and rhythm are amazing just like a pianos. Excellent job 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Bryan

    This is a very good poem rona, i absolutely love the flow and the words captured me, i give it a 5/5!!! please keep it up, these are great poems!!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Simple Sensation

    I love the rhyming in this poem. And it had an excellent flow. The rhythem is also great which considering is about a piano duet, is really put togerther nicely. You imagine a piano playing with this poem being read. It kept me wanting to read mpre throughtout it. An excellent poem, keep up the great work! xx

  • 17 years ago

    by melly xx

    This poem was very good, the rhyming didn't seem forced,there were alot of challengeing(sp?) which is always a plus. I could feel myself in the players position. I've noticed you use magical in many of your poems. Thats cute.
    good job
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Tammie

    That's a lovely piece you've written there. I love music and poetry, and with this combining the two, it's like heaven. The flow was great and you're descriptions, yet again, beautiful. This is flawless. I can see them playing in my mind. =] 5/5 Excellent write.

    Tammie

  • 17 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Yeah, that was very very good.
    I liked it, it flowed well and the imagery was good.
    keep it up
    much love, Tara-Kay

  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Beautiful.
    I stayed hooked throughout the whole poem and everything was just plain perfect.
    Wonderful job hun, keep it up! 5/5

    Stephanie.

  • 17 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    Wow.. you really do write about different things. The emotion was brilliant. The flow was amazing. The depth was heartfelt and the poem itself was fascinating. Lovely job, yert again. =).

  • 17 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Very sweet and happy poem! i like your use of words..great job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Beautiful penned piece just like the music you write of. Excellent job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Delie

    I think you took a fairly boring subject and made it very interesting! I never thought about a concert in that way! wow! you have very good writing skills...
    Love it! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Leanne

    This poem was brilliant!
    The imagery was great and the flow and rhyming never faultered.
    If someone had asked me to go and read a poem on a concert/playing the piano i'd have imagined it to be boring and dull, yoursa was very interesting and i enjoyed reading it.
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Wow, that was very relaxing in a way. The flow was excellent, and your word choice was good. Keep up the amazing poems.

    Peace, Joe

  • 17 years ago

    by David Wallace

    Thats a beautiful poem. u made one grammar mistake though. Instead of foot change it 2 feet.

  • 17 years ago

    by David Wallace

    Thats a beautiful poem. u made one grammar mistake though. Instead of foot change it 2 feet.

  • 17 years ago

    by X2892

    Another awsome poem, keep it up, 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by lala

    You have real talent. this is my favorite one ^^