Omg, This poem was amazing so much emotion was going on inside it i adored it it was so good and really passionate!!
xoxroxyoxox keep up the AMAZING poems!!

This poem is amazing. You did a good job writing it from a woman's point of view.

"A chance at the man I love or the one that’s already in my heart
he man that makes my heart jump or the man that makes my heart start?"

that was definitely my favorite part of the poem. great work! :]

Amazing poem.. 5/5

Niice poem Keep up the good work =)

Awwwwww i love it it sounds so nice