by Moon Princess Jan 10, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Cry me every tear, and will fill up a bath, take off this outer shell you have, and slowly slide in. You are so fond of the white linoleum, with all it's many stains, but cry me every tear, and we'll soon wash it out. |
The flow is awsome and the choice of words is great!! It's a great poem!!! I loved it!! Awesome write!!! Thanx for the comment on my poem!! Keep up the awesome work! |
by Gem
I can't be a proper music critic cos i have no idea what kind of tune this is supposed to have but i have to tell you, the words are amazing. |