I can't be a proper music critic cos i have no idea what kind of tune this is supposed to have but i have to tell you, the words are amazing.
You really have some great phrases in here that a lot of people can relate to.
I know i can
5/5
*Gem*

The flow is awsome and the choice of words is great!! It's a great poem!!! I loved it!! Awesome write!!! Thanx for the comment on my poem!! Keep up the awesome work!
Much Love,
~*Danielle*~