Perfect...lovely...amazing
Very beautiful poem...i soo loved it...n the imagery was just soo beautiful...lovely work...
perfectly chosen words..
Kp writing dear!
xxPoojaxx

I like you writing. it was sad. and the flow ofords was good. you choosed very perfect words in your poem. and nisely done aswell. take care

I like you writing. it was sad. and the flow of words was good. you choosed very perfect words in your poem. and nisely done aswell. take care

Amazing write. Like it told by 49 readers before me :) It's just so perfect and unique and i specialy loved imagery . Really nothing bad to say.
Keep up the excellent work!
5/5

I love how your poems end, their vocab, flow, and rhyming. your a great poet. i cant wait to read more of your outstanding work.

"Over the tracks and around the bend,"
^ didn't really fit with the rest of the poem.

Amazing last two stanzas.
Great poem, not my favorite but it was a good poem.
Still 5/5
Keep it up, hun.

I really liked the image and story you have created..so creative and so mysterious
Some of these poems from these category look so nosense but this was a real masterpiece
Well done,
Laura

Great poem. Though I do feel that the flow was a little off. I don't know maybe it was just me. I liked the word choice and the format that you used. I gave it a 5/5.

I can truly relate to the message of this poem. The flow is flawless, the wording unmistakable. and the truth of it undeniable. I also was impressed with your strong ending. I really like your style. 5/5>>>>>>>>>

Another wonderful poem, you really have a talent and a nack for writing, congrats, that's hard to find. definite 5/5

This is really good but u have some better ones. i would deff give this a 5/5 though!

From start to finish this poem kept me interested not once did I find it to fault in any way. I found this piece to be really facinating the title seemed some what angry and as did the poem but it also had sadness made beautiful. intriguing, capturing, inspiring, amazing, beautiful. I could keep going but I'm sure I would bore you to death. The last lines were so strong and made the poem come together really well. A unique topic yet again by you which you put everything you had into. Keep up the great work~mel

Very Very strong imagery
I really enjoyed reading this poem
it was nice and chilling
but it wasn;t like scary just mysterious I guess
you did a wonderful job
5/5

Wow... this is so good... i can't even pick my favorite part! the flow was pretty sweet... and i love your word choice! you're such a truly amazing writer... i can't wait to read more!

Sandra

You have this amazing ability to use words in a way that goes far beyond simple, and it doesnt seem as if you are trying to sound like this...brain-heavy intelligencer...wow, i just made up my own word there..i hope that makes sense..you're just amazing in which words you chose to use...i look foward to seeing more from you, keep it up!

Your poems are really catching. This one also rhymes so well and flows very well. Great wordins and good stlye. Very well structured piece. 5/5 all the way :)

tc
Fsams

Good poem

AMAZING, you are such a great writer. This piece, magnificent. You have the talent of a true poet. The words all collided together, creating something so new and different. The flow of this poem was like the flow of sweet water, the meaning so deep and incredible. My words could hardly explain how great you did. This is worth 6/5 probably more.
This is, fantastic!

A creative take on a more common emotion. Truly presents itself to the reader in a unique, well-thought-out way. The personification of a feeling sometimes doesn't work well, but you've pulled it off quite nicely. Great work!