A New Perspective

by Dark Demise   Jan 10, 2007


Time And Matter are all so important,
Imagination doesn't have a purpose,
Dark times still come to pass,
Faithful moments don't seem to last,

Introduce me to the restricted mind,
Introduce me to the path I'll regret,

Let's give in,
And not think of our actions,
Let's give in,
And not think of the outcome
Let's give in, And become worldly and fake,
And fight for a cause with no purpose,

So confused you don't know what to do,
Even when the right choice is obvious And straight In front of you,
So let go of fear and don't let it kick in,
Even when Times get hard, Or you'll end up like them,

Light the candle to start a new life

Get Away from the ways of society,
Make this your one Priority,

Focus on the real things,
Don't give into lust or feelings,
Focus on the life you're in
Don't let life stray towards sin,

Don't extinguish The candle,
Cause it's so hard to light again,

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  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie

    "Let's give in,
    And not think of our actions,
    Let's give in,
    And not think of the outcome"
    ^ For me, these 4 lines were the best in the entire poem - but I think this is because I can probably relate to them the most.

    I'll be honest, I do like this poem better than your other one though. :) But they're both still amazing poems. The flow was perfect, and your word choice was incredible.

    A meaningful write. Overall: 5.5
    - Steph.

  • 16 years ago

    by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA

    Wow, this poem was absolutely amazing. It has such deep words in it. It's very well-written. The flow was great and the image in it was very good. Great job! I loved it!

    .:CiNdY:.

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni

    This poem made me really think. I love though provoking poems, great job. keep writing! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    Really meaningful,i liked this like a quote

    Light the candle to start a new life

    Wow
    Keep on writing honey
    See ya
    Laura

  • 17 years ago

    by in.need.of.a.lucky.charm

    Wow i loved the ending!!!
    Don't extinguish the candle,
    Cause it's so hard to light again,
    perfection

    much love and many kisses,
    bex

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