Nice flow ya got goin here hun =]
was a good poem =]
~*~Jen~*~

I reli like this one. it has nice flow and and rhyme. i wish i cood rite like you. i red thru all ur poems da other day n i dnt fink dere was 1 i didnt like. well done 5/5. MazieX

+.+ I like the fact that your saying you won't change for a boy. Alot of girls should listen to this poem +.+

Hey
i like this poem. its simple and honest. Straight up 'what you see is what you get' i like that, no deception and everyone knows where they stand. Great poem.

Kelly
xx

I loved this poem sweetie! And sorry to hear about your stomach pains and your nan. I hope your both okay. I don't know whyJake broke up with me. I was like....soo upset! And he didn't even say it to my face. He had my friend tell me. What a jerk, right! Anyways....Thanks for the comment and support. It's all because of you and this site that I'm staying strong and getting through this break-up. Thanks!
xoxo

Another great poem i've read by you, the flow was great and i totally loved the whole point of the poem, no girl should ever change who she is for a guy and vice versa.
5/5

This is cute. Shouldn't this line:

"To guys as friends"

Read "two guys as friends?"

The message in this is also true. People meet people and they act or look a certain way and after a relationship is started they decide they want them to change something....
Nice job.