Comments : Unfinished

  • 17 years ago

    by Darien

    It was really hard to describe this poem, I couldn't find a better synonym than amazing. This was such a calm, yet sad poem. The emotions were so controlled, there is no aggression, this is the kind of sad where you hold your knees and cry. Not the yelling and screaming as you cry type poem. I really liked it.

  • 17 years ago

    by Rocky

    I think darien got it in a nut shell. there is no other word but amazing.

  • 15 years ago

    by ephemera

    I wrote this two years ago.
    I know how the story continues though. He loves me and he said it to me. But its too late now. I'm busy living my life.