Failure (train of thought)

by VioletRaven   Jan 10, 2007


Affliction rises in my throat
attempting a purge of my failure
the thoughts this act tries to deny
my unworthy words received
best friend
beloved

betrayer
b1t(h

selling my body,
my mistresses wh0r3
to atone for my heart
in all its flaws

i am the absent shadow
lurking now without cause
soon to be rid of my sins
Trieste,
avarita
gula

i must depart my beloved
my sins are calling to be punished

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  • 17 years ago

    by Lady Vengeance

    Wow, once again very powerful, strong stanzas. singling out the most important and meaningful words has done wonders in this poem. it's really very good. i've decided i'm gonna give u 5/5 for this one. see my vote!! lol. it was a beautiful read that really hit home. very well written.

    -Suz xxx

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