I really like this poem it's so true because we do sometimes go against what we feel but we just can't help it. Even if we think we could get hurt we always seem to take the chance. Amazing poem none the less great job 5/5 |
I love the way you title your poems, they're very creative! "It's tired of mending just to break" this line really got me. Excellent job! |
by emptysole
Hmmm i no just how yiu feel great work and great job bravo=] |
by Zaima
Nice & touching poem =) i can understand how u feel.. |
Cute poem... its very sad though, but you know that you should definatly follow your heart not your head, but your right with this poem it can cause a lot of drama when the two don't agree.. I loved the title of this that is what drew me to it in the first place and now that I'm done reading the poem I know how much the title fit. Very good, very very unique, thats why I loved it so much and very well written. |