This is great i loved it
good job
lol

OMG! This is great! Perfect rhyme, flow story, and so true! sounds like many a hurried trip shopping when I wanted to stop for a few items "real quick"....lol 5/5. Debbie

This made me laugh! Very cute, shows how hectic grocery shopping can be lol!
5/5

Wow amazing how you managed to turn such an everyday thing into this interesting poem! Well done! Definate 5/5

Great job! This was really good. Iwas on my way to bed and decided to read one more poem. I am glad I did, Loved It!

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wow that was so f*n funny! i loved it!

Very funny, sounds like me rushing at the last moment, trying to get everything together for a big dinner.

Haha funni plz go check out mi poems

Lol that was great, I see it happen in the grocery store all the time. 5/5

AHAHA this amused me a lot, I wasn't expecting that ending, but it was a good twist. I thought the flow was perfect and you did an amazing job with the imagery.