by Leanne Jan 10, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
I sit and start to wonder |
Whoa! Dude! This guy .. whoosh.. Does the kid like you? If so you guys should go out.. or is this just a made-up story.. It can't be! There's so much emotion. This is a really great poem, it caught my eye because I have a poem with the exact same title. :) mines more of a love-hate. Yours is better. You did an amazing job at rhyming a flow... |
I know the feeling all to well, when you have such strong feelings for somebody but you know you just can't have them. amazing job and great flow 5/5 |
by Jenni Marie
This is one of my favourites of your's. |