This is one of my favourites of your's.
Just as long as it isn't about a certain someone *nods*

I know the feeling all to well, when you have such strong feelings for somebody but you know you just can't have them. amazing job and great flow 5/5

Whoa! Dude! This guy .. whoosh.. Does the kid like you? If so you guys should go out.. or is this just a made-up story.. It can't be! There's so much emotion. This is a really great poem, it caught my eye because I have a poem with the exact same title. :) mines more of a love-hate. Yours is better. You did an amazing job at rhyming a flow...

Excellent Poem Babe

5/5