by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere Jan 10, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
I Don't Love You Anymore |
by Rocky
Or |
by Rocky
That was a decent poem. but i feel it could be better. the emotions and imagery was very good but it just didnt flow quite as well as it should. the poem just had a few sentences letting it down. eg |
by Cathy
Very sad poem, my daughter always says she hates her dad and she's only seven, I guess some men just don't realize the effect on their kids when they do things like this, or even leave. I hope your okay and again this is a great poem. |