Very sad poem, my daughter always says she hates her dad and she's only seven, I guess some men just don't realize the effect on their kids when they do things like this, or even leave. I hope your okay and again this is a great poem.

That was a decent poem. but i feel it could be better. the emotions and imagery was very good but it just didnt flow quite as well as it should. the poem just had a few sentences letting it down. eg
"You're always high on drugs,
coming home from the bar,
Nothing but one of the thugs,
Leaving me with one more scar. " but maybe thats just my opinion.
good poem never-the-less

Or
I'm always abused by you,
Nothing matters anymore,
now i say we are through,
i'm tired of this pain
as you trample my heart to the floor