Family (sedoka)

Awww so lovely! I never could write a sedoka...so this one is awsome! It's so true and just plain lovely! 5/5 from me!

This was very good, i've never tried doing this kind of poem, but you seem to have mastered it well.
well done
xxxxxx

Family is so important to have, no matter what happens family is always there. great job 5/5

I wish I wrote this..I am sooooo stuck for the second round of this contest *makes angry face* hahaha
I liked this, I thought the last line was really powerful.