I wish I wrote this..I am sooooo stuck for the second round of this contest *makes angry face* hahaha
I liked this, I thought the last line was really powerful.

Family is so important to have, no matter what happens family is always there. great job 5/5

This was very good, i've never tried doing this kind of poem, but you seem to have mastered it well.
well done
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Awww so lovely! I never could write a sedoka...so this one is awsome! It's so true and just plain lovely! 5/5 from me!