Comments : The Sudden Sight of You

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaylee

    This is really good! keep writing!!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by alone in the crowd

    This was a wonderful write! that is how i used to feel about this one guy! exactly right down to the last period! you captured the addiction so well in this piece! keep it up!!!

    Ashley

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    "Do not come looking for me unless you are willing to give me your heart as I have given you mine."

    A very poignant ending that sums up the battles of love perfectly.
    A lot of people can really relate to the feelings you've described in this piece
    5/5
    *Gem*