by CondescendingHeart Jan 10, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
Out the window time pasts by |
by Mommy And Me
Good poem. the flow was good and it had that certain.. realisim to it that draws a reader in . great work |
by celi
Wow! really nice poem, although it's sad..... i really loved the way you made the rhymes!! (gotta try it once too... lol! :p ) anyway, keep writing cause u got talent!!!! |