Wow! really nice poem, although it's sad..... i really loved the way you made the rhymes!! (gotta try it once too... lol! :p ) anyway, keep writing cause u got talent!!!!
celi ****

Good poem. the flow was good and it had that certain.. realisim to it that draws a reader in . great work

-/2 Terra

ps- sorry i'm taking so long to comment on your poems. i did this one so you knew i didnt forget. right now its tough for me. but i will do your poems soon.