You Just Wanna Stop*

by lost in lovee   Jan 10, 2007


You wanna stop doing this,
You just wanna look thin,
You know it's gonna kill you,
But you think it's worth the risk.

All your friends are telling you,
You really need to stop.
You just wanna be perfect,
You're giving it all you've got.

To stop, your trying your hardest,
But it doesn't seem to work.
All you ever wanted
Was for him to have a second look.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Simple Sensation

    A great read, i liked the story behind it, its quite short, yet a very meaningful read. i can relate to this, well the begining of it, my reasons for starting were different though, yet you know how it will kill you, and you wnat to be perfect so bad, i can relate to that so well. Keep up the work! xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Laybelled with a name

    I understand your poem so well. my favourite lines where "you know it's gonna kill you,

    but you think it's worth the risk."
    Well done!

  • 17 years ago

    by arietty

    Wow really nice. Quite deep. Nice sort of delicate. Well done. xx

  • 17 years ago

    by twisted reality

    Structure's a little odd. 5/5 xoxo

    Samantha

  • 17 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    I liked this one very much. It held so much depth and heart. Unbelievably nice work. You could be going somewhere.. =). 4.4/5

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