It is a shame what people sometimes do in order to please other people. Heartfelt write. Keep using your pen to put your thoughts on paper. Nice job.

I liked this one very much. It held so much depth and heart. Unbelievably nice work. You could be going somewhere.. =). 4.4/5

Structure's a little odd. 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

Wow really nice. Quite deep. Nice sort of delicate. Well done. xx

I understand your poem so well. my favourite lines where "you know it's gonna kill you,

but you think it's worth the risk."
Well done!

A great read, i liked the story behind it, its quite short, yet a very meaningful read. i can relate to this, well the begining of it, my reasons for starting were different though, yet you know how it will kill you, and you wnat to be perfect so bad, i can relate to that so well. Keep up the work! xx