Sometimes It's So Hard*

by lost in lovee   Jan 10, 2007


Sometimes it's so hard,
Getting through the days,
Realizing what you lost,
There has to be another way.

All this pain you feel inside,
Just wants to come out,
Looking back a your relationship,
You never had no doubts.

Together, forever
You thought you'd always be,
But something went wrong,
It's just to hard to see.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Aliysia

    I luv Disz POem.. itsz realli good.. Bcuz i cant relate 2 disz Alot.. Go0d Work hope U can keep it up...

  • 17 years ago

    by Perfect Facade

    Omg, that is soo true! I love it! 5.5
    Thanks for the comment btw

  • 17 years ago

    by Cattiebrie

    Straightforward and simple. nicely done. I think every one can relate.

  • 17 years ago

    by Simple Sensation

    Aww! I really loved the emotion in this poem, it was rerally heartfelt, and touching. It had a great flow, and the rhymes didnt seem forced. Its again short, but still got loads of meaning behind it. I really enjoyed it! One thing to impove, is your punctuation, i htought you could of used enjambment nad stuff like that. Still an excellent read, keep it up! xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Laybelled with a name

    I love your writing stye! You manage to keep it easy to read but still mantain meaning! I loved it well done!

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