I think this is a very good poem antonia, love the flow, i give this poem a 5/5!!! great poem so keep it up!!!

Young love is so sad. This seems to be inspired by heartbreak. Keep your head up and keep writing. Nice job!

I like this one ALOT!!

short and simple.. but still strong feeling behind it.. great job!

I liked the emotion and heart you put into this one. The flow could be a bit better.. but you are just starting out. Good work. 4.4/5

Waiting is the best thing you can do.

I liked it. Good job. =) 4/5 xoxo

Samantha

Alot of people can relate to this. I thought this was really nice. Well done. Very well written. xx

I love your writing stye! You manage to keep it easy to read but still mantain meaning! I loved it well done!

Aww! I really loved the emotion in this poem, it was rerally heartfelt, and touching. It had a great flow, and the rhymes didnt seem forced. Its again short, but still got loads of meaning behind it. I really enjoyed it! One thing to impove, is your punctuation, i htought you could of used enjambment nad stuff like that. Still an excellent read, keep it up! xx

Straightforward and simple. nicely done. I think every one can relate.

Omg, that is soo true! I love it! 5.5
Thanks for the comment btw

I luv Disz POem.. itsz realli good.. Bcuz i cant relate 2 disz Alot.. Go0d Work hope U can keep it up...