Letting Go*

by lost in lovee   Jan 10, 2007


It's so hard to let go,
Of all our memories we had.
We went through alot,
The good times and the bad.

Then you cheated on me,
It's too hard to believe,
I thought we would last forever,
But I was too blind to see;

You always looked at her,
In such an adoring way,
Me and her had our bad times,
Each and everyday.

You always ignored me,
To be with her and all her friends,
I never thought I'd feel this way,
But I just can't stay

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  • 17 years ago

    by xxxStarSxxx

    I've got a poem with the same title! But about this one..i really like it. I've had that happen before too and it sux, ne? 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Kayla

    The rhyme scheme was a little weird and it needs some work. All the lines should rhyme, the 6th stanza doesnt rhyme but all the other ones do, but thats the only suggestion i have. Also, i didn't feel the emotion in the poem. Make me FEEL something! Although the idea of the poem is good, it needs some work. keep it up though!

    -kayla

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    This is a nice poem which is written greatly.

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I loved this.
    There was so much emotion packed into this, and I could sense the pain behind the words.
    I enjoyed the imagery used and I thought it flowed really well.

  • 17 years ago

    by Leanne

    I really liked this poem, its the worse feeling when someone you really love cheats on you.
    Great write 5/5

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