This was wonderful i liked the way you kept going back to ' you took my life, right then, right there' that really added a lot of effect to it, it was very well written i think you have a lot of talent keep it up 5/5

This poem really touched me. i can really relate 2 it cuz i have a problem related 2 bulimia. i liked the way u imagened bulimia as a person. thats really cool. keep up the good work 5/5 =)

Thats such an amzing poem. i cant believe how well you have wrote it, its so very good well done please write more x x x x

Amazing write. i loved the repition of the phrase "You took my life away, right then, right there." it added depth, in my opinion. 5/5

ThankYou:)

Wow! i loved it...pretty awesome! i loved the repitition...and i loved how u reflected bulimia as a person or a living thing..
"Remember the first time you appeared Mia?"
loved that line...5/5 from moi :D

I like this loads, it really captures how so many people are, and i can kinda relate to it so that makes it mean even more to me. beautifully written; it is really unique :)
polly xx

After 33 comments above, there's nothing much left to be said. This is one good poem, strong emotions. But I didn't like the fact that you repeated the last line all the way. Loses its effect after the 3rd stanza. However, 5/5.
~Br0k3n

Omgg i love how uve made Mia the bulimia in this poem its really clever. making it a person i like it =]
Im sorry if uve been through it.
Lots of love
Geo
xoxoxo

Love the poem great job...5/5.......your are a really good writter......oh and if you will can you please rate and comment on my poems thankz.....

Heyy this is a quite a good poem, it reminds me of someone i use to know.

I like the repetitive lines, it seems to work in this poem.

A job well done.

Im sorry but that is scary to me, i thought about purging acouple times too but then i did research and it just messes up your insides, this is a really good poem thou i really like the flow and the way you repeated yourself! Good job

Oh honestly..this poem is iz amazin..and ur amazin writer as well..u have done a great joB here.. Most plp suffer cuz bulimia..we pray 4 them..my friend is in bulimia..this poem touched my heart..very well done..
I loved it 5/5
-sarah

Wow simply amazing work
keep it up!