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by White Blizzard Jan 10, 2007 category : Love, romance / lost love
When it flows through the stream You blind your eyes in light After your luck falls out of dream The last card is so bright Feel the river love Seal your heart flush Like love you're hoping for the Ace With a shove she will pull out a spade Bury your heart and leave you in space Now you walk in the dark shade Feel the River Love In my mind nothing is a straight. ~**White Blizzard**~ ~**Blizzard Inc.**~
by Gasttlee
This is cool! The flow is excellent and everything fits together! 5/5
by Twobit
Amazing! 5/5
by Nix
I like it very much. Flow is great and poem is very deep. It is short but very powerful. Ending is superb. Well done, 5/5