Excellent poem, I like your style and deep thoughts well written poem I really enjoyed reading, I want this all to end
break loose wild and free
and one day ill look back
living through my dreams, very nice job, keep up the good work will be reading more,thanks your friend Tracy,,,,,,5/5

Greatly written love poem, with excellent choice of words through the whole piece.
My favorite stanza is:

-all that I love is lost
but the song I sing lingers
waiting for something
fate to pull the trigger?-

5/5 from me