Solider

by xFadedxForeverx   Jan 10, 2007


Give me my freedom
Give me my pride.
Give me the things
Others pass by.

Show me pain
show me war.
Show me the things
I need to be thankful for.

Take away my selfishness
take away my gifts
Make me strive
to make it Thur this days shift.

Help me have courage
help me be strong.
Help me to know
whats right from whats wrong.

I am a solider
support what I do.
Please stop me in the store
just to say thank you.

Men and woman
fight by my side.
Million of them
have even died.

Help this country
Be all it can.
To gain freedom
in the eyes of every man.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    Awww this was really good it was sad because you know this is based on something real but it was excellent 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    A very powerful poem, especially in this day and age.
    It had a nice flow to it as well that kept the words steady
    Nice work
    5/5
    *Gem*

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