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by xFadedxForeverx Jan 10, 2007 category : Life, society / patriotism
Give me my freedom Give me my pride. Give me the things Others pass by. Show me pain show me war. Show me the things I need to be thankful for. Take away my selfishness take away my gifts Make me strive to make it Thur this days shift. Help me have courage help me be strong. Help me to know whats right from whats wrong. I am a solider support what I do. Please stop me in the store just to say thank you. Men and woman fight by my side. Million of them have even died. Help this country Be all it can. To gain freedom in the eyes of every man.
by Kaila
Awww this was really good it was sad because you know this is based on something real but it was excellent 5/5
by Gem
A very powerful poem, especially in this day and age. It had a nice flow to it as well that kept the words steady Nice work 5/5 *Gem*