by KeyxMashingxParody Jan 10, 2007
category :
Life, society /
other
The smell of eroding hearts fills the sky, |
by ALEX
The only really poignant thing about this one was the energy in the last half dozen lines. Not even just the caps, but the repetition, etc. I don't know... it was a little sad for me, but I can see the effort in it. It's good, but not one of my favourites. 4/5 |
by Vanessa
Man that was really really good. I mean truly wonderful. Ilike you style 5/5 By the way for this one I am adding you to my favorites |
by Kaila
I liked this one it somewhat reminded me of a music video jut the way it was described nice job! |
Ace!!!! |