Very nicely written. I loved it. However in the first Stanza, you used the letter, "U" in place of the word, "you" switch it..lol The flow was good, as well as the structure. Great Job.

Peace, Joe

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Thats the link,

I really like your Poems, They are really good this one is a 5/5

Greate Poem... I rely feel the love..