Some of the words you use are very hard to incorperate into poems. but you mannaged very very well.

5/5

david

This I liked for it was saying nothing but the truth.

"Build yourself up inside
to let it all out wide."
good advice!

Marjan

This is a very uplifting and inspirarional piece. It was really a beautiful piece of poetry. 5/5

marcella

I have no more words... your poems are just filled with feelings... they actually diserve more than 5/5