Silent Moment

by Cathy   Jan 10, 2007


It feel so good sometimes when were both sitting there
the tension between us disappears with a single stare
we look at one another I know we both feel the same
but for some odd reason the end soon came
I know were both confused and don't know exactly how to feel
But I do know that these butterflies in my stomach are for real
I have so many questions I want to open my mouth to ask
But I just sit there silent just letting the moment pass
I'm just amazed of the moments we use to share
I get lost in my thoughts when your standing there
I want to wrap my arms around you and just squeeze you tight
I want to be with you forever cause I love you with all my might
Your everything to me your the heart that beats within
It is your love in return that I'm hopeful I will win again
But for the moment I'll accept it that you want to go slow
maybe thats the only way we really need to go
To make this relationship work, to give it one more try
We need to start all over before these feelings die
So I will be your friend I'll be there when you want
I won't let the old memories come back to me to haunt
I'll just let it go and start by making a mends
so that you and I can be together once again
So for this silent moment I'll leave you with a kiss
Just to show I love you and that it is you that I miss

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  • 17 years ago

    by Ed or Ian Henderson

    I'm a bit of a purist, so I'll apologize beforehand...

    "but for some odd reason the end had soon came" is grammatically wrong. You should think about dropping the "had" as it's redundant. And dropping it doesn't spoilt the flow.

    I like the content of the poem because there really aren't that many pieces on here that deal with forgiveness, only the transgressions that might precede them. It's nicely put together too, if a little rigid.

  • 17 years ago

    by Krzysztof J

    "I want to be with you forever cause I love you with all my might" I really love the poem but this line touched me deep :) its a fantastic write :))

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