It is a GREAT poem kenneth, it doesnt have to rhyme to be a poem, hun! lol..there was a question to the reader it seems, so i feel obligated as that reader to answer:
I think you should stay with her...but no more push and shove..for awhile at least...Because you seem to compare yourself to this guy alot, and you seriously feel that the things you have done are just as bad as what he's done to her...I hope this helps babe, and if it doesn't, just tell me so..and I'll think my little blonde head to the point it blows up, and see if I can help you out so more...I hate reading these poems being so sad all the time..you need to find someone to make you happy, one you dont have to keep chasing after constantly...
well, Iprobably am taking way to much space so ill stop. just know you are loved.:)