by *Charisma* Jan 11, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Take Me Away From Here |
Wow. This was so sad. But amazing! It flowed really really well.. And brought tears to my eyes. I can totally relate to this. The imagery was really good.. & It just really touched me. |
by Krzysztof J
Wow the first poem of yours i read and im hooked this one is sad but stil filled with a shine of hope :)) love it 99/5 |
by ABake
I love this poem, as reading it you can almost see the image forming in you head! Great job! |
by Cindy
WOW! Great write. I think these are the king of poems that will reach out andhelp someone. Hopefully to get out of this kind of life. Excellent job! |
by Leanne
Such a powerful piece, so sad and moving. |