Aww hunni i hope this isnt happening to you. this is such a sad poem and has a lot of strong words, it brought tears to my eyes. wow your amazing at writing though.
5/5
-chelseaa;

I don't know what to say... This poem hit home for me and i don't really know how to respond, lol.
It was so sad..
*Gem*

Excellent poem. It is so frightening that people live their entire lives with this constant fear and pain. You really drove home how they must feel..so helpless. I thought it was a great piece. Take care.

Kelly
xx

Such a powerful piece, so sad and moving.
Great write!!

WOW! Great write. I think these are the king of poems that will reach out andhelp someone. Hopefully to get out of this kind of life. Excellent job!

I love this poem, as reading it you can almost see the image forming in you head! Great job!

Wow the first poem of yours i read and im hooked this one is sad but stil filled with a shine of hope :)) love it 99/5

Wow. This was so sad. But amazing! It flowed really really well.. And brought tears to my eyes. I can totally relate to this. The imagery was really good.. & It just really touched me.

Great job, once again hun.

Bri.x