I get the feeling here that you feel more like the Sun will never 'rise'...rather than 'set'.....................
A raw and effective delivery......May you soon feel healed.........

Thanks for the comment! wow. your poems are really good!

This was a really good poem. i thought

This poem is amazing... 5/5

That was so sad, but beautfully written. It had a nice flow and great imagery. Keep up the good work. *5/5*

Alyson

Im not to good at commenting but i really like this poem. keeping writing

Thanks for commenting my poems! I`ve read almost all of your poems now... And I really like them!! Keep on writing!

Wow. This poem has real depth. It seems as if you reached deep into your soul on this one. Good job sweetie

<3 Holly

I like this poem. i feel the same way

This is my favorite of yours I've read so far. But perhaps it would be more if you broke it up a little to make stanzas. It would be easier to read, I think. They don't have to be even at all.
Great poem!
-Parker

That was nice sad poem, you express it in a good way- i like that line 'there is no1 i can trust' even for most of us- it hard to trust a any1- phenomenal poem