This was really cool and well written, I would have liked to actually hear it as a song. I'm sure it would have been really good.
be happy :)

Honestly, i read it as a poem and skipped the "musical" part, and it was great. So true, and so well expressed.
Good job.
5/5
♥
~Stephen White

Once again good job. You seem to always have good rhyming with the flow. This one had the most imagery though. And once again I'm taken away by the emotion you put into the poem. I liked the chorus a lot.