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  • 17 years ago

    by Lovefreak

    That is deep loved it

  • 17 years ago

    by Fay

    I liked this poem, it was different to the usual and it's structure was great, I know how u feel and I can relate to it soo much :( good job though ;). Plz read mine and comment, I'm sure u could relate to them to, thanx.

  • 17 years ago

    by Matthew

    Sort of confusing but still well written out,rhyme scheme is great to

  • 17 years ago

    by Paige

    One word
    lovely
    call you
    xD