Comments : W[h]iL[e] Y[o]u W[e]rE Sl[e]ep[i]Ng

  • 17 years ago

    by The Nameless Poet

    Hola mamitá, cómo está todo? awww that was a sad poem,but este poema es mucha with a lotta emotion to it. i hope tu amigo gets better. 5/5,any ways bien hecho mamita, hasta lueguito.

  • 17 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    This is a really great poem, i love the flow and it was very emotional, you did an excellent job 5/5 check some of my stuff I think you'll like it

  • 17 years ago

    by BrokenxLaughs

    Wow.
    this is amazing

    you have great ways of expressing yourself =]

    keep it up.