I know exactly how you feel. Keep up the good words. :)

Hey! that's a beautiful, meaningful poem! i really liked the way you've shown that in the he needed you instead of the opposite!! keep up the good work!! 5/5
celi ****

I usually favor rhyming, But you impressed me without it. You did a great job on this poem. I really can feel your emotion through this. Beautiful. I like this part the best:

But why did I always end up taking you back knowing that you would only leave me heartbroken as you did once before..

Amazing Job Babe!

5/5

It is an interesting read, it has a letter type feel to it, but that is just me. I think that it is very clearly worded, straight forward. nice, easy read. good job

Love is so special and can mean the world to us, but when it all goes wrong theres no worse feeling in the whole world. amazing poem 5/5

It was good, but it seemed more like a letter... not quite a poem.. still a good write though, i liked it, nicejob

I'm sitting here shaking my head at people like you've just written about, how selfish they can be. I know all too well what you are going/have gone through, I have too. It hurts. Alot, and I'm right there with you. You expressed alot of emotion in this, and asked all the questions I'd like answers for, and the answers are just so right too. Great write, very honest. =] 5/5

Tammie

Love the ending!!!

A very honest write.
I like honest poems, ones that mean something through until the end.
This poem was something i could relate to, although with a friend.
You are very talented
keep writing
much love, Tara-Kay

WOW! I loved this, maybe it was because i can relate to this so much. I can really see the emotion you put into this, but I didn't find the lines were very poetic, only because they seemed to wordy. I did really like this line though:

"Why did I think that everything would go back to the way things were when I know if you hurt me once, you'd only hurt me again..."

I can definately relate to every word.

--Steph

Wow great poem! i really enjoyd it!

This was reallyyy goodd:) i liked it alot

Very cute poem written with a nice flow and beautiful words. I Like your poem very much. Keep it up. tc 5/5 sure