by Truest Lies Jan 11, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
The wave crashes down her eye, |
I really enjoyed this poem. I loved the way you opened up the poem, the "inner tidal wave", great imagery used. And the ending was quite sad, but its something we can all relate to at one point or another. It had a good flow throughtout it, good use of lanuage. It has a sad story in it. But its an excellent read! Keep uit up! xx |