Backstab!

by David   Jan 11, 2007


The blade deep inside my back,
Twisting and turning,
Painful and burning,
A dagger full of my lack.

I scream for a stop to this,
Voice within,
Telling me something,
More numbness like bliss,

Soul and memories drain from me,
Drip Drip,
From my lip,
Leaving just pain for me to see,

Who is my murderer I ask,
Twist and turn,
Wounds will burn,
But i cannot see past the mask,

Crimson river as my life begins to fade,
Death is nigh,
I ask myself why,
I ask what enemies I have made,

And at the last breathe and goodbye,
Enemies none,
Except for one,
I see past the mask,
I see him at last,
For the murder is I,

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  • 17 years ago

    by Tammie

    I like the style in which you wrote this. The storyline is intriguing too. I wasn't expecting the ending. As usual, another excellent poem by you, glad to see them still coming. =] 5/5

    Tammie

  • 17 years ago

    by Sandra D

    This poem is amazing, u know it!! i love the words you used, made me feel it as i was readingit... kinda scary, but i love it anyway! great job! 5/5!

    *Shawte*

  • 17 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Wow!!!!!!!! omg!!!!!!! i love it!!!!! ..... great emotion...so deep..wow.. excellent job! 5/5.....ur a great writer. i love all of your poems.

  • 17 years ago

    by Marjan

    Ouch! David, couldn't you make it less vivid?

    Marjan

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    Yer you got the spelling right. i now don't care wat they think.

    from now on i will keep records on all my poems, over night. see wat ppl vote. go the maths. lol. i now have found a reason to love maths. lol

    i know kiara. thanks a heap. i am fine now. got over it all. just who cares if they give me a 1. i will just care who gives me the 4 and 5s. and return em back to them.

    i have to comment on a few of your poems. and if you see how many votes you have now i will vote on them all. i know they are all great so i will just give em all 5s.

    as repayment for all your encouragement.

    David

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