Life (Sedoka)

This is quite a short poem, i think it could be improved by making it a little longer, though the contest may of had a word/stanza limit. I liekd it but i kinda felt it was incomplete... Still it was inspiring. Keep up the good work! xx

This one also is very good. I like the concept of life here. Great job!

I like this formatted style you used. Short but to the point. Very uplifting and it you cold not have been more right...life is what you make it!
I really enjoyed this read. Good luck in the contest you deserve to win.