This is really good....the flow was a little off but the message was so strong it didn't matter. And I loved your closing stanza. Great job!
~Midnight Sun

You have done a amazing job on this poem. From begining to end. I loved the way you have told of harmful decisions then ending it with some hope. Excellent writing!

Really good read. I liked your usage of reptition, "Harmful Decisions", which you also used as the title of this poem. The message was clearly portrayed in the poem, and the ending was outstanding. The flow was ok-ish, but i think you could of improved it. but still i enjoyed it, keep up the great work! xx

Wow that was excellent
5/5
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I loved this poem, ur a very good writter

We all make bad decisions sometimes and we never think about how harmful they can really be to somebody else. I really loved the way you wrote this poem it was excellent. Great job 5/5

Oooh, i like it! I like how it all went together and all of the parts were like separate little story-things. it was great and fun to read. good job!
-parker

"But how can they succeed in their mission
When they have to compete against Harmful Decisions?"... i love it when poems end in a question as in depth as this..... great job... well written

Another great one.. i like this poem alot. your def gonna win the contest!! lol

Another great one.. i like this poem alot. your def gonna win the contest!! lol

Another great one.. i like this poem alot. your def gonna win the contest!! lol