Freaking awesome

Its really good....I like it

Usually I don't like non-rhyming poems, but this was an exception.
I liked the flow and the first few lines really plled me in.
I think you did an excellent job.

Its gripping how you described this person with phrases that aren't common. Atleast, I think thats what you're doing haha. I reread it, and then I started to get the gist of the overall emotions you were trying to display. I think it was well written because it sounded like something you would say in your mind, and because it didn't seem forced. Good.

Ooh. Spine Tingling. i love this one as well. it flowed wonderfully even with out rhyme. and the language was great. your a poet that can write wide varieties of poems well.

x33 Lauren

That poem had a good rhyme and flow to it. i had to read it a couple of times to get what you were trying to express, but well done

Beautiful vivid description. Awesome imagery!
5/5
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~Stephen White