Leave Me With One More Scar

by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere   Jan 11, 2007


* Okay when your reading this poem, please have an open mind. If you have a big imagination or open minded this poem will relate with you or you feel the same way. It may not make sense but it will when you have an open mind. Thank-you! *

Leave Me With One More Scar

Leave Me With One More Scar,
I'll be okay,
I may just die inside,
But you don't need to know.

Leave me with one more scar,
One more thing to hurt about,
One more day will pass on by,
But my pain won't ease.

I won't open my heart wide,
So you can see clearly,
Every single scar,
The world has left me.

Everyday I'll die again,
Every moment one thin layer comes loose,
Every hour the pain increased,
Every second goes by and I'm losing you.

I don't ask for you to understand me at all,
But just to be there,
When I fall,
Or when I start feeling bare.

I don't want to have the name of,
A screwed up girl,
With scars upon her,
I just want to be understood, I cannot be perfect.

Leave Me With One More Scar,
Tonight I shall vanish,
I lost you and every second of my life,
I dare you, Leave Me With One More Scar.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Gem

    I don't know if i understood it the way it was meant to be portrated but the way i read it and the emotions i felt from reading it were very strong and thats something a good poettess is always striving to give her readers.
    And you my dear, achieved it effortlessly. Thats the reason your on my faves =)
    5/5 as always
    *Gem*

  • 18 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Amazing.
    So different and unique.
    Yet, I feel the emotions that you're trying to portray in the poem.
    You're really talented as a writer, keep it up! 5/5

    Stephanie